Chicano Poet

Tuesday, November 17, 2009

Ventana

I followed the mangy dog
into a barrio

you could count the bones
of his ribs and shoulders

the sunken eyes
of its lost race

no illustrious ancestors
no hope to lick while waiting for tomorrow

children threw stones
at him

drunks kicked at him
old ladies yelled at him

with his tail between his legs
he saw his reflection in a storefront window

startled
I recognized myself

6 Comments:

At 5:36 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Great!

Esmeralda

 
At 12:16 PM, Blogger RC said...

Thanks,Esmeralda.

 
At 12:29 PM, Blogger Jake said...

Hey Rey I really like this one!!

 
At 6:18 PM, Blogger RC said...

Thanks,Jake.

 
At 6:12 AM, Blogger anisa said...

I've been liking these barrio poems too = )

 
At 8:18 AM, Anonymous Bernadette said...

Hello Senor Cardenas,
This is very good.It works well. This mangy but enduring dog. Pehapas just see it as Giacometti's. Bernadette

 

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